Out of style

sorenbarrett

Today what is in fashion is passion, love is on ration with a shortage on compassion
Marketed sex with people sold as objects reflects valuing only what they have on their decks
The gold in their hold never extolled pleasure served hot soon turns cold and growing old does mold
In a throw away world the shiny seductive is unfurled but it tarnishes and to the garbage is hurled 

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  • soheil khodaparasti

    A powerful critique of a culture that often confuses passion and physical attraction with genuine love and compassion. I like especially the comparison between the way people and relationships can be treated as commodities and the way disposable consumer goods are valued, used, and eventually discarded.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thank you Soheil your words are most appreciated my friend. Yes love or passion has been sold for millennia by form of dowry. Today it is marketed in other ways.

      • soheil khodaparasti

        You are welcome. I agree—the ways in which love and passion are commodified may have changed over time, but the underlying idea is certainly not new.

      • arqios

        When things that should matter no longer do, it makes me wonder if poems and poetry are among the throw-away variety of stuff. 🕊️🙏

        • sorenbarrett

          Thank you Cryptic for your bent on this poem and yes that is a valid question and why more people tune in to tic toc than poetry.

        • Mutley Ravishes

          Lust, perhaps the greatest messenger or our present times? I just posted a rhyme on this too!

          • sorenbarrett

            Thank you Mutley for the review yes I read it and find it interesting how many of us seem to be on the same wave length. I appreciate your input my friend

          • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

            a perfect summing up my friend

          • Thomas W Case

            This has a sharp, cynical pulse, taking aim at a culture that markets desire while starving people of damn compassion. The rhyme drives the argument forward like a machine, and the final image of shiny people becoming disposable trash hits hard.

            • sorenbarrett

              Thanks my friend for the review and comment of support it is deeply appreciated

            • Demar Desu

              Seems like you’ve been outside lately… great poem elder

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Demar your reads are always most appreciated

              • orchidee

                Good write SB.

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you my friend I truly appreciate your visits

                • Paul Bell

                  Love is 50 dollars, lust on the other hand, now that's a 100 dollars for sure.
                  Tax deductable in some countries.
                  It is weird, but every time you buy something, it becomes yesterdays object, and that includes people as well.
                  I can see why lots of women have cats now.

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks Paul for the read and understanding comment as always it is most appreciated

                  • Fränz Müller

                    Nice work!

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thank you Franz your words are most appreciated

                    • Kevin Hulme

                      Nicely Summed up. It's the way of the World I'm afraid.

                      • sorenbarrett

                        Thanks so much Kevin I do appreciate your review and comment.

                        • Kevin Hulme

                          My Pleasure as always.

                        • Tristan Robert Lange

                          Soren, this one has some bite, my friend! There’s something deeply sad about treating people and intimacy like disposable commodities…eventually everything becomes another product to consume and discard. Powerful write! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                          • sorenbarrett

                            Thank you my friend I appreciate the read and understanding of this piece. Yes everything is a commodity now days

                          • Goldfinch60

                            True words soren.

                            Andy

                            • sorenbarrett

                              Thank you very much Andy I appreciate your review and your support is most important to me

                            • NafisaSB

                              truer words were never spoken so eloquently- agree with you here

                              • sorenbarrett

                                Thank you very much Nafisa for your review and most kind words of encouragement they are dearly appreciated.

                                • NafisaSB

                                  Always welcome 🤗

                                • – NoeticNonsense

                                  Marvelous!

                                  • sorenbarrett

                                    Thank you so much for your read of this piece it is most appreciated and valued

                                    • – NoeticNonsense

                                      Absolutely! Thank you for sharing!

                                      • sorenbarrett

                                        Thank you for your review and comment it is appreciated



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