A shoplifted heart

Allie561

I took the heart from a corner store

"Don't tell," I'd implore

Some shrugged it off

They'd seen it all before


The heart was soft and new

It felt good and true

Just perfect for me

Since I gave my last one to you

 

I hid it carefully in my bag

And made sure it did not sag

I snuck it out the door

Past the lady taking a drag

 

It'd be too much to buy

Prices for hearts were much too high

People would take hearts from others

So there was a shortage in that supply

 

So I held mine close 

And didn't give it away for a rose

This one was precious

Not worth something pleasant to the nose

 

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  • sorenbarrett

    Clever association of images make this poem very nice. Loved it especially the last lines. Well done.

    • Allie561

      Thank you Soren, it took me a bit to figure out a rhyme but I’m content with it

      • sorenbarrett

        You are most welcome Allie

      • Fränz Müller

        We need to guard our hearts, indeed!

        • Allie561

          Very true Fränz! Thanks for commenting

          • Fränz Müller

            You are most welcome!

          • Demar Desu

            Damn Allie you are on fire!

            • Allie561

              Haha I got the creative juices flowing again!

              • Demar Desu

                Let us toast!

              • Tristan Robert Lange

                My friend, the whole idea of hearts becoming scarce because people keep taking them from one another really got me. That’s clever as hell…funny on the surface and rather sad underneath. Beautifully done, Allie. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                • Allie561

                  I’m really glad you enjoyed it, you’re an encouragement Tristan!



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