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Neville

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She held a long glass

with something

on ice in her hands

and of course,

she looked just about

perfect like that ..

All kind of poised but

unposed if you

know what I mean ..

And when set

against a backdrop

of those bright

painted beach huts

and parasols

she knew she was or

near as damnit ..

Yes she could lay like

that in the sun

all day long and not

even blister

but would still look

as cool as any cucumber ..

  • Author: Neville (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 13th, 2026 11:41
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  • sorenbarrett

    A perfect picture a snapshot in words. Nicely formed Neville

    • Neville


      Many thanks my friend .. Neville

      • sorenbarrett

        Most welcome my friend

      • Tristan Robert Lange

        My friend, what caught me most is that balance between pose and ease. She feels completely aware of the picture she’s making without ever seeming stiff or manufactured. Nicely done, Neville. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

        • Neville



          The fact you could see it my way was more than enough my friend .. Thanks again and ever so .. Neville 🏴🐦‍⬛🐈‍⬛🐧🖤👍

        • Goldfinch60

          Wonderful words Neville.

          Andy

          • Neville


            Thank you most kindly Andy .. Neville

          • orchidee

            Good write N.

            • Neville



              Thank you orchidee .. Neville



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