Life And Death FIBS

Goldfinch60



To

This

Fine world

I was born

To a life of peace

To live with you in harmony

 

 

I came to this earth long ago

Bringing peace to all

Near my end

I fade

To

Nought.

  • Author: Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 21st, 2026 01:15
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 38
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  • orchidee

    Good write Gold. I forget that FIBS has TWO lies of one word each. Not about to fade out yet? Not about to fizzle away yet?! Us two haven't faded for millions of years. lol.

  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    good write, we all fade to nought

  • sorenbarrett

    I love the subtle shape of the poem that seems to accompany its message as it grows from birth and shrinks back at the end. Nicely done Andy

    • Goldfinch60

      Thank you soren, much appreciated.

      Andy

      • sorenbarrett

        Always most welcome Gold

      • arqios

        From fineness unto fineness, infinitely! 👍🏻🕊️

        • Goldfinch60

          Most kind Rik, thank you.

          Andy

          • arqios

            Most welcome, Andy🙏🏻🕊️

          • NafisaSB

            A nice reflective piece 👌✌️

            • Goldfinch60

              Thank you Nafisa.

              Andy

              • NafisaSB

                you are welcome..have a good week ahead



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