There are many fused bulbs
Basking in past glory
They come – one and all
And oft repeat their story
They fail to remember
Their time has now gone
And the spotlight’s now moved on,
That once over them, had shone
They constantly keep harping
And claiming they were the best
And how they had easily overtaken
And overcome all the rest
How does one convince them
They are no longer in the race ?
Their claim to fame is over
They should surrender with grace !
Their names may still live on
And adorn the walls of fame
But now they are a “has been’
And are definitely out of the game.
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Advice: Do not attempt to disillusion , walk around and move on. Be thankful they've revealed themselves to you in such an open way.
I'm pretty sure most folks are deluded one way or another - even me.!
Neat piece of verse though.
Thanks for the advice- I am glad that they strutted so confidently in our society that they deluded very few- most saw through them and ignored them 😱😛😂
Yes a few do manage to pull the wool across our eyes though
A wonderful metaphor in this piece. Nicely rhymed and with good meter and flow. Very nicely done with a good message. I have some old bulbs that still shine bright though.
Thanks we have a few old ones atill shining bright because of their current status and image caused by their actions as well as a few fused ones who gave rise to this pi ce of verse😛🙏🏼
My pleasure
My friend, what a sharp and honest piece! There is something deeply sad about people becoming so committed to former importance that they cannot recognize the present. Legacy deserves respect, but grace requires knowing when to step aside. You delivered this brilliantly. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks for understanding the core message 💅look forward to seeing your work always
I simply love what Tristan has said here, a wonderful piece powerful and makes a great discussion 🌹
glad it resonated with you..there are many such here around me, as also some humble souls who do not reveal their achievements...so saluting the laater, and trying to keep distance from the fused ones...
have a good week ahead...hope to see lots of contributions from your side..
I think you've said just about everything that needs to be said on the subject .. and you have said it so very well .. A brave and insightful poem indeed .. Neville
Thanks for understanding the core issue. God bless you and yours. Have a great weekend 🤗🙏🏼
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