I'll un-power you right here and now
I'll let you swim in your own broth
wishing that it never does scold you.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: It sure is good getting this down on paper. 💜 🌹
- Category: Reflection
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I loved the play on a word here scold and scald. Clever and nicely written it is a reproach to those that meddle where they ought not. A short but strong message to not get in hot water and get burned. Well done my friend.
Sometimes things that other people do can chance changes in us, but as you can see i would nor could ever change, I will continue to see the bright side in any trouble that comes my way, thank you my dearest sorrenbarret, I've missed you in these weeks. 🌹
So glad to see you back it was my pleasure
What a strong piece, Teddy. The boundary is absolute, but the humanity remains intact...you leave consequences to do their work without wishing destruction upon anyone. Wonderfully expressed, my friend. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you so much dearest Tristan, it's been a hard year, things I never thought I'd see iny life but hey here I am strong as an ox 🌹
Tremendous work, my sweet Teddy.
Would need to be Gazpacho, it doesn't scold.
Though I'm thinking you want hot soup on this occasion.
let them swim in their own broth, I don't care how hot it is I don't care at all.... 🤣 Thank you my dear Paul 🌹
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