There's a cool breeze blowing
Tomorrow rain will be flowing
Wind brings the clouds
Lightning and thunder in dark shrouds
Gentle at first
Then with a burst
The crash
Giving earth a thrash
Stalls a pall over all
Drops have started to fall
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Author:
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Offline) - Published: September 20th, 2026 03:32
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The power of nature
Thank you Norman for the review and comment it is most valued my friend
most welcome
Nothing like a good dusting and wash down 🙏🏻🕊️
Thank you my friend for the review and comment. Yes it is easier to see one's real self with the dirt removed.
Excellent. Vivid and sharp.
Thanks Thomas your words always appreciated my friend
Good write SB. I heard a crash in the kitchen - KP smashing plates, bored with sewage every day. lol.
Thank you Orchi for the read and comment. That's not healthy bits of glass don't digest well
Yes there's Something about the Wind picking-up and the Black Clouds looming.
Fine discriptive write.
Thank you Kevin I appreciate the read and comment my friend
My Pleasure.
Now I want a dark porch, a chair, and a hard rain, Soren. Loved this one. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thanks so much Tristan I appreciate the read and comment.
Those drops may fall soren but skin is waterproof.
Andy
Thank you Andy for the review. Yes skin is indeed and will dry after a while if one has the patience
sounds very much like the rains we have here..thankfully the rainy season is ending though, and the warm days are making their way back
Thanks so much Nafisa for the read and comment it is most valued
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