Down hill

sorenbarrett

 It begins as a vibration

A hum becomes a whistle pitch

Harmonics build

Resonance growing

Frequency slowing

Oscillating

Amplitude increasing

Waves building

It shakes

Swings wildly powerfully

Tsunami

Surge

A wild bull bucking

A tank slapper

Death wobbles

Head over heels

  • Author: sorenbarrett (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 21st, 2026 03:23
  • Comment from author about the poem: Any motorcycle rider would know
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 20
  • In collections: Love, Out of one's control.
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Comments8

  • nephilim56 ( Norman Dickson)

    Finely spoken my friend, horse power building

  • Paul Bell

    This is why I drive a car, motorbikes always come off second best.
    Mind you, now we have bicycles flying by at a rate of knots.

    • sorenbarrett

      Thanks Paul I appreciate the read and comment my friend. I used to ride a bike for years but it got too dangerous with the people on the road not paying attention.

    • arqios

      A veritable feast for the eyes, the mind and heart. Good stuff Soren! 🙏🏻🕊️

      • sorenbarrett

        Thanks my friend your read and comment are deeply appreciated.

        • arqios

          Most welcome dear friend 👍🏻🕊️

        • Kevin Hulme

          A lot of Comments here associate this Poem with Cars , Bikes . On Reading my first thought was 'Falling in Love'. Says a lot about a Person. Other People: Other Interpretations.
          Good Write.

          • sorenbarrett

            Yes it does Kevin when starting to write it my thoughts were about bikes but in writing I saw it applied to other things as well. Thank you for the read and comment my friend.

            • Kevin Hulme

              My Pleasure.

            • orchidee

              Good write SB.

              • sorenbarrett

                Thank you Orchi it is most appreciated

              • Friendship

                nice write

                • sorenbarrett

                  Thank you very much Friendship your words are most appreciated

                • Tristan Robert Lange

                  Soren, I felt this in my stomach. By the end, I was bracing for impact. Powerful, my friend! 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦‍⬛

                  • sorenbarrett

                    Thanks for the read my friend it is as always most appreciated.

                  • Goldfinch60

                    That increase in power is shown so well in your words soren.

                    Andy

                    • sorenbarrett

                      Thanks so much Andy your words mean a lot and are most appreciated



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