"weaving dreams"
on my downy pillow
I will snore, as they say
to ruffle night's silence
prop my fluffy teddy
to my shoulder
press down my ear
and float off into
the dream weaver's
open embrace
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Author:
crypticbard (Pseudonym) (
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We all become children again in dreams and the soft covers of a bed where time has no meaning. A mother's loving embrace resurrected in night's shadows. This poem is tender and comforting. I loved particularly the first stanza where your poetic imagery breaks the silence like a snore. The last line "to ruffle night's silence" is marvelous and caught my attention right away. Well done my friend.
Thank you, Soren. Sometimes those minutes just before sleep gets us becomes our only “me” time in our frightfully busy days!🙏🏻🕊️
You are most welcome Cryptic yes one of my favorite times of day or be it night.
Dreams, our ultimate entertainment , be they good or bad
An apt word: ‘entertainment’ dear friend 🙏🏻🕊️
much enjoyed
Hello, arqios,
In snoring dreams and all is well with the world, the epitome of serenity. I'm quite relaxed, myself after the reading. A lovely poem.
Fond regards,
Tony.
Thanks heaps, dear Tony. That’s a world to be returned to every night! 🙏🏻🕊️
Well done
Thanks so much dear Friendship 🙏🏻🕊️
Good write weaver, erm, A. lol.
Thank O 🙏🏻🕊️
The Annoying thing about Dreams is how they slip from the Memory when waking.
A good short Write.
Yes that is an excruciating annoyance if ever there was one! 🙏🏻🕊️
Insomnia at night, sleep all day. I have hopes that your short enough to remeber poem may be the first step to righting the situation...
That would be a much welcome relief 🙏🏻🕊️👍🏻
Rik, you’ve talked me into calling it a night…though now I want a teddy before I go! Great write, my friend.🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Haha, teddies all around! 🐻👍🏻🕊️
Dream away Rik, dream away.
Andy
Thanks dear Andy 👍🏻🕊️🙏🏻
Good night 😴 sleep tight 😴
Many thanks 🙏🏻🕊️
Sweet dreams 😴 relax and get refreshed and may your dreams be attainable and come true 😁
Thank you kindly my friend 🙏🏻🕊️
Very well written I love this
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