devastating loss
trees ancient old, ripped from ground
by hands of the wind.
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Author:
Teddy.15 (
Offline) - Published: October 11th, 2026 07:14
- Category: Haiku
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- Users favorite of this poem: sorenbarrett, Cheeky Missy, Tristan Robert Lange
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Comments6
A most beautiful haiku Teddy and with meaning.
Tha k you so much dearest sorrenbarret I'm finally getting my mojo back after a very rough year. 💜
You are most welcome and glad to hear it
💜
natures fury
Yesterday I was speaking with my family about the 1986 hurricanes we had in the UK I was only 12, then I realised it's 40 years ago, so I thought I'd try this, I do love haiku and senryu it's such a challenge just 12 syllables thank you dear Norman. 🌹
most welcome my friend
Powerful. I feel this.
Could you see the hands? 🤣 🌬️ Tha m you dear Thomas. 🌹
Dear, Teddy,
A storm itself can be horrifying but the aftermath can be so saddening to the point of tears. I could never conquer the haiku, what you have done in thirteen words would take me about eight stanzas and many months to describe. So, hats off to you - a perfect haiku.
Fond regards,
Tony.
Thank you so much dear Tony, 5/7/5's are one of my favourite forms, hats off to you my friend an 8 stanza poem from you is an incredibly grand lesson to me. 🌹
Oh, Teddy, this is heartbreaking. I've seen what severe storms (internal and external weather) can do, and it never gets easier witnessing that kind of destruction. 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Thank you my dear Tristan, I saw it 40 years ago in my hometown of London, I was 12 years old. 🌹
Amen.
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