With tears

BlessedbyGod

With tears in my eyes and an ache in my heart, 

I look back at my life , all the way back  to the start

The lost childhood to becoming an adult too soon,

to the thing that made me a mother , still feeling doom

my daughter was born and I finally felt true love 

I know that God sent her to me directly from above 

I prayed for her when her heart wasn’t beating 

I felt Gods love and healing spread throughout my body the temperature mildly heating 

I prayed that I would follow Him no matter the cost ,

fast forward 11 years , when I left and my daughter I had lost ,

my right being forced from me when I was battling mental health,

but I still had the love of God - and it felt like I had all the wealth ,

now its been 4 years and still I haven’t seen her beautiful face

I failed her as mother and I’m falling in disgrace 

The biggest love I had - I left behind 

I sometimes think what would have happened if I could just hut rewind 

with tears in my eyes and an ache in my heart 

I realize this was meant to be from God right from the very start 

  • Author: BlessedbyGod (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 14th, 2026 00:11
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  • orchidee

    A poignant write B.

  • sorenbarrett

    Touching and raw this one with rhyme lays bare the soul which is what poetry is about.

    • BlessedbyGod

      It had me crazy emotional while I was writing it ,
      It’s sad but true

      • sorenbarrett

        Yes

      • ForeverJesus7

        I can not imagine what that must be like, and I know it must be lonely to have no one to be with you. ... but GOD always loves you
        Persistence is key

        • BlessedbyGod

          Every step of the way



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