Well we are back home,
Four days we had,
Had at a wonderful hotel.
We had good food
And fine drinks
And stayed in a beautiful room,
A room filled with silence
That brough such joy to us.
But best of all was the entertainment.
The band were there,
There all week.
They had sessions at lunchtime
Playing jazz and jive,
And in the evenings the band played,
Played such wonderful swing music
And people danced,
Danced and danced all evening.
Such a wonderful time was had
And our love for each other shined,
Shined out to all around,
All the wonderful people we met.
It was such a good time
And we will be back,
Back next year.
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Author:
Goldfinch60 (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: We had a wonderful time at Sinah Warren and will be back.
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Comments6
There is a sense of contentment that goes with this write my friend bringing a feeling of satisfaction and future anticipation.
Very true soren, thank you.
Andy
Most welcome Andy
Isn't it great when you actually get what's on the tin.
I take it you had a great time.
Yes Paul, we had a wonderful time. Thank you.
Andy
a good time had by all
So very true Norman, thank you.
Andy
most welcome
The poem itself swings. That repeated beat -we had, they played, people danced, love shined, feels like the music from that week. Simple and full. Nicely written!
Most kind Salvia, thank you.
Andy
Good write Gold. We hardly missed ya. Not in the sense of 'If we saw ya or not, it wouldn't make any difference' cos we would have missed ya and ya fine poems. Do shut up now, Orchi, says Fido, as I begin to waffle. lol.
I still write even when in holiday Orchi so all is good.
Andy
What a lovely account of a memorable getaway! Your words capture not only the joy of music and dancing but, more importantly, the beauty of sharing those moments with someone you love. A delightful celebration of life and togetherness! Oh, thanks for the entertainment. I listened to the band and the singers Side by side...
Thank you rr, yes it was a super time all round for both of us.
Andy
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