"Your first task
Is to find
Even a single dot of tension
In Sol's shine"
Said one of the Imaginations
"I can't, dammit!"
Said the billions
"You're next task
Is to ask why
You couldn't find
One"
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Mutley Ravishes (
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Clever and a mind provoking read and task. Nicely done
Thanks for dropping by, Soren. It's a question I've been asking myself too.
You are very welcome Mutley
Well, Mutley...I’m tempted to question the instructor as much as myself. What answer were they expecting, and why should I assume they’re right? 🌹🖤🙏🕯️🐦⬛
Well, I guess there's two ways (or more) to see it. Either the "student" couldn't find a single dot of tension because there is none. Or the "student" couldn't find a single dot of tension because "his/her" awareness is not yet expanded enough to find one. And maybe the "student" and "teacher" are one and the same "mind" challenging itself?!
Deep and brilliantly put.
Thanks a million!
Thought provoking 🤔
That's the idea! Thanks for dropping by.
my pleasure !
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