i was drawn to the coaster
from the blasted poster
hung up on the strip joint wall.
i sat in it in confidence—
no need for god’s providence—
a lap bar to stop the fall.
“hold both your damn arms, clown,
i will lower your lap bar down.”
its voice echoed down with gall.
but as the ride started going—
lap bar movement not showing—
my heart clenched into a ball.
the upside-down loop approaching,
the terror fast encroaching,
but this coaster car won’t stall!
six, five, four, three, two, one—
oh freaking no!—i am done!
this damn devil’s my fun’ral
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© 2026 Tristan Robert Lange. All rights reserved.
First published on tristanrobertlange.com, October 24, 2026.
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- Comment from author about the poem: Part of the Darklings collection.
- Category: Gothic
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- Users favorite of this poem: Salvia.S, Teddy.15, Kevin Hulme
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Good write T. Agh! Not Mondays. lol.
HAHAHA! Orchi, there's simply no escaping the madness anymore! Not even on weekends! LOL! 🎢😈💀🙏
A ride to hell a modern Charon where one has to pay to ride and there is no going back. I remember once riding at an amusement park where they forgot to close the lap bar and I was hanging on for dear life. Good one Tristan
Holy hell, Soren! You actually lived through something like that?! I'm glad you made it back to shore without paying Charon his fare! LOL! Thanks for sharing that with me, my friend! 🎢😈💀🙏
My pleasure my friend
when you 've survived a day in the hell that is Alton Tower you're a man my son !
Keep the certificate of manhood, Lorenz...I’ll be at the snack stand, bravely guarding the doughnuts! I went on the Nitro at Six Flags Great Adventure here in NJ and, well, the "Air Time" nearly made me need a fresh new pair of pants. I survived. Does that count? LOL! 🎢 😈 💀 🙏
I took a look .. Yep ,I admit ...
good write my friend
Thanks for riding along, Norman...I’m heading straight for the funnel cake. Let'e know how the inversions go! ! LOL! 🎢 😈 💀 🙏
lol
Bloody hell, I love this... Your scenery and atmosphere is fabulous, you did make me chuckle because I've been to hooters but never to this joint... 🤣
Haha! Thank you, Teddy! Been to the "family-friendly restaurant" Hooters too 🤣, though now that I am vegetarian...not much there for me! LOL! Strip joints aren’t my thing... but apparently I’ll put a roller coaster in one! 🤣 🎢 😈 💀 🙏
That'll teach him to sneak on for Nothing.
A good Write.
Haha! Thanks, Kevin! I think he’d gladly pay double to get off now! 🎢 😈 💀 🙏
My Pleasure.
Hello, Tristan,
Thundering helter skelter at white knuckle speed for entertainment - you'll find me in the pub. A rip roaring descent into hell. I'm in a cold sweat just reading it. Well done, my friend.
All the best,
Tony.
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