Your Love
Your Love is the soft murmur
… that I hear in your heart
Your Love is the radiance of your smile
… and the sparkle in your eye
Your Love is the melody in my mind
… as your presence surrounds me
Your Love brings meaning to my life
… and serves purpose on my journey
Your Love is my everything
… without which I have nothing
Your Love is all that I need
… for all that I need is you!
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Author:
Huzaidi Hashim (
Offline) - Published: June 21st, 2010 22:25
- Category: Love
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Comments3
Your inspiration like warmth breeze for the loving heart...
Hope to read more of this..
it's very good
my regards
Thank you for your comment, offer of friendship and generous A10 rating for my poem. I am a 51 year old Malaysian father of 8 from my two surviving wives (legal in my country) which comprise of 5 sons and 3 daughters. The poem "Your Love" was written after the birth of my youngest daughter Alanis, now 4 months of age. How much love can one feel from someone who can barely express themselves with spoken words? How can you tell if they love you? For me it was the murmur of her heart, the sparkle in her eyes, the melody of her presence and the purpose she inspires within me. One needs to open one's heart to be able to feel these emotions emanating from them. Although the poem refers to Alanis, it is also dedicated to all those whom I love, especially my loving first wife Siti Mariyah and my second wife (mother to Alanis) Rosnita
NICE.......it is touching....... and i loved it... bt something is missing in the feeling...... i dont knw hw to say that... bt its good........
Beautiful! 🙂
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