yesterday i had the best B-day party ever
i was alone without my friends but it's better
coz i know that i'll be in their hearts 4ever
i wish they were with me that day
& i hope they feel the same way
i hope they rememberd our silly days @ school
our joking , playing & being such a fool
also annoying the teachers by our behaviors
dancing , singing & being such a failures
these r the things we were doing @ school
annoying everyone & being such a fool
now you all know what we were doing there
i think you should think & be alittle fair
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Author:
lulu (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 8th, 2010 12:28
- Comment from author about the poem: i guess even if this poem is short but i feel it remembers me by my best friends i had who r still my friends but they r far away from me living @ the other side of the world :(
- Category: Friendship
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Comments3
memories are the best
yah sure that's also a reason 2 live this life 😀 🙂
Wow! Memories can never be washed away by the long showers we take. Its a beautiful piece, i love it.
thanks alot 😀 cheers 😛
U r welcome my dear
I really like this one...you made me smile with your delightful presentation of school days with friends...it's humorous and funny, especially the last two lines...and too cute too....
Too bad your friends have be so impossibly far away...sweet memories are comforting....but left with only memories, it is hard. This is a delightful tribute to your close friends! I love your rhyming and rythm!
Oh god .. it is really hard when u know that ur friends are far far away
thanks a lot for ur comment 🙂
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