Those days the world around me
Seems dark, I can’t see anything
All my thoughts & dreams were vanished
I became dreamless & thoughtless
I had no dreams on those days
But… sometimes in the midst of my sleep
A thought arises gives me inspiration to run…
But it remains for a moment…
I don’t know what happened to me…?
I don’t know what is happening around me…?
I don’t know why this darkness...?
I don’t know am I scared or not…?
But Before………
I was a king, valiant over valiant…
But now I am scared, scared …
Yes I am scared equal to a coward…
I failed in the battle and missed my way….
There is none to help me…
So I cried, cried...& cried… At the top of my voice range!!!
Suddenly,… A clam wind blowed…
Flowers of my kingdom bloomed…
They spread the smell of joy…
They spread the breeze of life…
She came like alight…
I saw her and she showed me,
The path to my destination…
And I walked after a triumph….
I walked, walked, walked …….!!!!
- Author: nikhil PS (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: August 15th, 2010 04:43
- Category: Unclassified
- Views: 85
Comments5
keep going. this one was great!
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very nice.hope u go on
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I love it
nice!
I love the picture with it!
While it begins hopeless, it ends triumphant.
I enjoyed the way you presented this with the speaker's initially troubled thoughts turning to relating his deliverence.
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