Summer made the Greenland
Into a pure dry land!!
All the Greenland suffered with the heat
Small lives were crying!!
The people are tired
And don’t know how to act!!
Scarcity of water everywhere!
All small & big lives were struggling…
The endless struggle…
Endless prayers… every where ,
Even the rats, rabbits to the wild tigers…
All prayed & cried!!!
Why the god is so cruel!!
Soon as,
There felt a breeze…
Clouds crowded at the sky!!!
A drop Of hale kissed at the cheek of little slum girl…
All the dead lives reborn…
They rejoice in the drops of rain!!
They felt a sign of help at every touch of every drop!!!
All it gives is pleasure but somewhere it sowed
The seeds of life!!
The sign of help….!!!
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Author:
nikhil PS (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: A ROMANTIC POEM! I LOVE MY NATURE... WANT TO PROTECT IT PLEASE GIVE A HAND TO ME TO PROTECT IT!!!
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Comments4
Its a nice poem
your really good
nice. i like it . life is precious for man , animal , and greens. great to vis. i like to read more .keep writing.
ya of course i wish to write more........ and also i wish u to read and comment on it!!!
Fascinating. I like the way you painted the scenes. Unfortunately, for your loving entreaty, the earth everywhere is being helplessly, hopelessly destroyed, inspite of the cries of the people living on it, and likewise being destroyed.
As for the cruel god.....it is not the true God of the Bible....He is not cruel, His mercy endures forEVER and His tender mercies are over ALL His works, His Word says, and His Word is true.
Couplets, triplet, quatrains, triplets....very nice.
You did a very nice job. I like it.
thank u! and i didnt say any god frm book.. just the ultimate power it may be anyone.. but i said god is cruel bcoz.... of the suffering of the people... thats all! and I'm a christian too...
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