A BREEZE!!!

nikhilps

 

Like a vagabond,

I walked through the swifted road

Thoughts of life and death in my heart

I am slow in this swifted road

Under the burning sun

                                   I looked around

                                   The shining road is busy

                                   But I am… idle…

                                   Everyone, the motor cars to hawkers were busy

                                   Some thoughts made me sad

                                   Some thoughts made me slow

I looked around,

Searched for a hand to hold…

          A shoulder to cry….

          Someone to share……

And, somewhere to be alone….

                                                    I want to cry...

                                                    I want to leave this burden…

                                                    I want to be free….

                                                    I lost my originality… I felt!

Now I feel,

                 I am in the hands of a dark devil

  I felt dark everywhere

I felt feeling alone

I felt thorns of lie on my chest…..

I am bleeding I felt!!!

                                                                         In that swifted road

                                                                         Like an abandoned soul

                                                                         With a weeping heart

                                                                          And with a laughing mask

                                                                           I walked without an aim…

I cried, and I am strengthened,

I shared, and I am free,

I got a friend,

A friend from the earth,

I felt rejuvenated….

                                        With a smile in my lips

                                         With a rapture in my heart

                                          I said silently to myself….

                                        “Without a breeze…

                                         Ecstasy of the evening is incomplete”

       A breeze has life!

       A breeze gives life!

       A breeze is life!   

  • Author: nikhil PS (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 11th, 2010 06:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: I LOVE MY NATURE MORE... AND I WANT TO GIVE THE SAME PRESSURE THA T I GETS FRM THIS NATURE TO MY SON........ I DONT WANT TO DESTROY THE NATURE...
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 52
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments4

  • jvl narasimha rao

    Dear Nikhil, I love this poem.Your love for nature is great.I think you blossom into a wonderful poet by and by.I have given a 10 for this poem

    • nikhilps

      thank u sir! with ur blessings..... i will be a g8 poet one day!!! and pls comment on poems..... so that i can judge my self............

    • nair36

      your really good... i like how u turned the poem around from feeling sad 2 good 🙂

      • nikhilps

        really? thank you my dear!!!

      • Cheeky Missy

        A breeze IS so refreshing, especially in an oppressive day. And nature is often a relief to so very many from the oppressions of man. In light of that this is an excellent piece!!

      • ironmaiden_81186

        i guess this piece of urs...brings out the nature lover and a traveller in you..
        very well written...loved it



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