Do you ever feel like your falling through an abyss?
While falling do ever you think about this
Why am I falling, and how did I fall?
Is there any purpose 2 this at all?
Why is it dark and why can’t I see?
How come it’s no one else but me?
What have I done 2 fall so deep?
It’s been days but still I can’t sleep
I don’t think the abyss will ever end
I hope in time, that I can ascend
Do you ever feel like life is 2 short?
Like nobody’s there and you have no support
Has anyone grown adapt 2 being alone
Or stopped 2 ponder about the unknown
Picking up habits because you are stressed
Sometimes you don’t know why you’re even depressed
Wondering about the paths you have chosen
Leading 2 being so cold that your frozen
Feeling like heaven and happiness is so out of reach
But though that may be true you still try 2 get each
Do you ever feel that way?
Like it’s “every” single day
To others at least
Like time has somehow ceased
And falling through an abyss you know it’s a thought
You just feel that way but it happens a lot
Life may be 2 short but you can extend it with love
It’s that prosperous push that gives you a satisfactory shove
These are just some answers I’ve found here and there
I guess I just thought I could share
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Author:
Rob (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 11th, 2010 12:38
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Comments2
Well at first it's a good poem...& I do feel the same way sometimes like I have these moments when I feel that am so alone in this life with no support & hope , so yah it happens , so don't u think u r alone 🙂
ur the best lulu 🙂
Thanks 😉
Nicely written. I think you described the feeling very well, while it's a feeling that's not so easy to describe, at least in my opninion. So, good job
thank u 🙂
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