As seconds turn to miniutes and Miniutes turn to hours and then our days turn to months, we sometimes forget what we have when we focus on what we don't have.
It isn't until we take a step backwards to look forward,for us to see that we will only be happy when we find our selves.
This will happen when you love the life you are living.
- Authors: Jason Humber (Pseudonym)
- Visible: All lines
- Finished: October 30th, 2010 11:00
- Limit: 6 stanzas
- Invited: Public (any user can participate)
- Comment from author about the poem: I will never be better if nobody tells me what I did wrong so I can correct it.
- Category: Love
- Views: 163
- User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
Comments3
nice work
Thank you Mikeal
Don't worry, if I can, I'll always be around to tell you what your problems are so that you CAN correct them.....let's see, shall I check all 25 submissions for typos and misspellings? Just let me know if I got the job!! Hahaha! oh, but this is fun!
nice poem
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