it was truly an angel
fallen from the sky
her voice made you feel high
made me feel like i could fly
but i didnt even try
i wanted to stand there watch her go by
her lips looked sweet
like a red cherry pie
i went over and said hi
she was dam shy
i pointed to the sky
and asked her lets fly
me and u my angel
like butterfly
but after that she would cry
i wanted to dry her tears
with a kiss on each eye
i would have taken down any one
who hurt my butterfly
guns blazing like the FBI
without her i would die
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Author:
ishmeal mikeal (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 10th, 2010 00:24
- Comment from author about the poem: reminds me of the night i met my love
- Category: Fantasy
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- Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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Comments3
why u never comment cheeky
Well, honestly.......I stick my foot in my mouth almost every time I open it......all my bright ideas stink after a few hours/minutes.....unless I have an immediate response, or am burning with a response I don't spend time trying to make a fool of meself......again, I may like the piece or something in the piece and disagree with other parts.....So, now what will everyone think? Now I will comment on this piece for you.....
I love the love you have for your darling angel. I hope you always treasure her so.
I have been twice called an angel by guys who liked me.....neither has me, nor did the last really want me. So, it is an interesting thing for me to read your sweet lines to your beloved.
I like the sentiment expressed....it is very sweet and romantic!
thank you for +the kind words for i will always will hold dear my words and my angel for no poet on this world can describe her beauty thus for me she is a godess
thanks cheekey u commented on my poem
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