winter aurora

ironmaiden_81186

The unhindered mental blockade,
the monotonous blinking of eyes,
a crumpled paper and,
the frozen ink of my pen,
all subside

to the white expanse of  a lonesome land,
the mountains on the horizon silhouetted
against the shimmering dark space

as the solar wind ionizes the thin air
high up where the doors of perception
give way to science
and the nature bestows upon us a spectacle
of lights,
of possibilities,
of elegance and beauty


even on this frozen night of sordid dreams
winter aurora wreaks silence
flaring up the night, yellow and green

  • Author: ironmaiden_81186 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 11th, 2010 07:48
  • Comment from author about the poem: this poem is about the brilliance of an aurora, which is a scientific phenomenon occuring near the poles. the picture depicts the poem
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 53
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, mikeal
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  • Cheeky Missy

    I love the picture and how you used the natural phenomenon to create a different scenario....excellent!

    • ironmaiden_81186

      thank you cheeky for the kind words, and yes i think its the beauty of the picture that brings the best out of the poem.

    • jvl narasimha rao

      I love the poem for its beauty and rated it with a 10
      JVL NARASIMHA RAO

    • mikeal

      beautiful reading it feels like i can see it truly smazing

    • ironmaiden_81186

      thanks all u guys...



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