my solar love

Aviksha

 

Today in the morning,

few thoughts got there path enjoying the vista..

Its me n my my words

that sun n my LOVE..

 

Bewitched beauty of the dawn

makes me feel your gimleteyes..

n ur cutest yawn,

gives him reason to rise..

That day break brings smile on my face,

but just got smitten on the smile of ur face..

 

your words are my dawnchorus,

holding them all for just Ad infinitum..

Sun reaches sky to meet its soul..

you are with me

who cares parasol..

That monster shows own attitude,

nothing in front of you beautitude..

with the transit of the sun,

my love goes my,

n with the sunset my wait goes up..

as my love

that sun never fades,

comes at night

like grace of your face..

Embarrassing you

with my little gaze,

feeling a little

bit of my craze..

Holding you with every moonlit..

telling you to be mine with my wit..

My friends often says i'm moon over you..

Wats my fault wanna lean over u..

Wats my fault wanna lean over u..

 

 by aviksha

 

 

 

  • Author: aviksha (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 15th, 2010 05:07
  • Comment from author about the poem: to all those fallen in love
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 49
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Very nice....you captured the enlivening, refreshing, heightening, exciting sense of falling in love.....it is like the sun, a fire, yet flickering, and similar to the reflection moonlight is, gaining strength from the source of its desire.
    I like it very well. Good job!



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