My thoughts were once surrounded by truth, and as I get closer to your untidy world, I have learned that only Happyness will never be real until my love is all about me.
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Author:
Jason Humber (Pseudonym) (
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Wow! I LOVE the photo!!!! Can I have it on my birthday card...(Mommo?) oops but she's not gonna see this....
Whose untidy world is the speaker nearing?
That was very intelligent of you not to classify this piece, since I can be a contradictory pain if I disagree.....you saved yourself that time.
I like the idea that you will find happiness when your love, whatever it is, surrounds you, hopefully truth is united with it as well.
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