hey velvet butterfly
let us paint the sky
no one to complicate
lets just simplify
pry open the gate
no more i can wait
this is our fate
no more debate
free from all the hate
this world we will create
where the sun does shine
and weather is fine
a place of wonders
our own design
where you are always mine
hey velvet butterfly
lets just paint the sky
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Author:
ishmeal mikeal (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: every one has there happy place this is mine
- Category: Fantasy
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Comments3
Aw, sweet! This is so delightfully romantic.
I love it! And spoken truly with the irresistable enticement of the guy...."no more can I wait/this is our fate..."
i edited u can check again
And you improved it thereby! I thought it was good as I first saw it.
Congratulations! You made it even better! I do so like it! It is so romantic the way you depicted it all...wonderful...you are flying so beautifully high, painting the sky together....Excellent!
its always nice to get your comments thank you
I Love the flow of the poem!! very good
thank you rafaella
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