One Look on life

southernbelle18

One look in the mirror, can that change of how you look on the outside!

One more tear, can that solve problems you face in everyday life.

one more heartbreak, does that mean you have to give up.

one more disaster and your heart is broken into millions of lyes.

how can you go on living on these steps by day

how can you smile when you know it wont take away the pain.

how can you breathe when you always feel so  ashame.

Its just that one look on life.

how can you go on with this war

how can your heart feel so sore?

how can you say goodbye for the day, when you know its not going to be the same when you wake up the next day.

its just One look on life!

  • Author: southernbelle18 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 23rd, 2010 00:36
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this poem when i was sixteen, My mom is a recovering Alcholic and when i wouldnt see her i would write how i thought i felt about the outside of my door. I love writing! many people cant see or understand why i write this stuff but it comes from my heart!
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 48
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    It is an interesting reflection,.....a call to change seriously? a call to not give up?....a serious consideration in a mixed-up condition.......very interesting.....I like it.

  • Lifewellspoken

    That's a very nice poem. 🙂

  • mikeal

    i know these feeling personally so i get what your saying clearly



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