Days were shining
And i'm living
Skies were cloudy
And I'm happy
Cheerful days
Colourful ways
Bliss of youth
An ear to hear
A shoulder to cry
A hand to hold
Always i had shadows around me
Days became dark
World seems dark
And i was dying
Loneliness binding
No ears to hear
No shoulder to cry
No hands to share
No shadows to hear
Wrold seems strange
I'm like a stranger
Iam living without shadows
My words are unheard
Is world want to paralyse me?
"If world is wishing me to live alone
I'll show them how to live alone!"
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Author:
nikhil PS (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 24th, 2010 07:48
- Comment from author about the poem: when we are alone we feel it difficult to live, but if we could live alone then we'll feel difficult to live with others...bcoz unknowingly we'll start loving our loneliness........
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Well, first off your comment/opinion....I hope we do never love loneliness over loved ones, yet I allow solitude to be somewhat universally praised in contrast to perpetual companionship, which mark is possibly where you are aiming. I dunno. Afterall, considering the closing lines of this piece, loneliness does NOT sound desirable, but rather a determination to say, "I WON'T buckle....I will NOT be crushed by my loneliness! They won't find weakness in ME!" Which reminds me slightly of the old song which sings "I am a ROCK/I am an island...." or some such.
I like this piece....you expressed it all very well.
And your image at the top is perfect!
thank u!!
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