FAR away from the known city

In a strange city

A handful of loneliness

And an eyes full of hopelessness


Without any dreams

And with fake dreams

I was falling into the thorns of darkness

Everything was dark, only remains nothingness


No siblings to heare

No friends to share

No shelter to stand

No letter to send


In the midst of my loneliness 

Some words came breaking my loneliness

Words beyond the boundaries...

A sister from beyond the boundaries

Praying for an immortal relation

Knowing that is a mortal relation


I sowed the seeds of brotherhood

A rejuvenating dream....

I went to sleep....

With colourful dreams of brotherhood.....


  • Cheeky Missy

    Aw, my darling brother PS! It is very sweet and so like you, my dear brother! Yet, you have her with her back to you and I would gladly look into your face! And yet again, it is symbolic of the distance that keeps us from looking into each other's eyes when we speak. I like this very well.....and you are VERY sweet! And I too pray that it may not be only for here and now, but that the Lord Who made us both and brought us for this moment together, will save us both by Himself that we may see His face for eternity.
    Thanks for this, PS!!!!
    Your Chechi!

    • nikhilps

      thank u chechi! and thats it.... i too pray to the lord like that.....

    • Kri2arch

      Thats a good poem

      • nikhilps

        ya thats a good poem but i missed many letters in the words.. i mean the spelling mistakes... sorry friend......... I'll make it correct now...... ok.... and a big thank u for commeniting on it

        • Kri2arch

          U r always welcomed. Keep the fire ablaze....a great poet( u) has come to live

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