FAR away from the known city
In a strange city
A handful of loneliness
And an eyes full of hopelessness
Without any dreams
And with fake dreams
I was falling into the thorns of darkness
Everything was dark, only remains nothingness
No siblings to heare
No friends to share
No shelter to stand
No letter to send
In the midst of my loneliness
Some words came breaking my loneliness
Words beyond the boundaries...
A sister from beyond the boundaries
Praying for an immortal relation
Knowing that is a mortal relation
I sowed the seeds of brotherhood
A rejuvenating dream....
I went to sleep....
With colourful dreams of brotherhood.....
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Author:
nikhil PS (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 26th, 2010 05:35
- Comment from author about the poem: THIS DEDICATED TO MY SWEET "CHECHI" WHOM I CARES MORE AND FEELS SHE TOO CARES ME.........
- Category: Love
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Comments2
Aw, my darling brother PS! It is very sweet and so like you, my dear brother! Yet, you have her with her back to you and I would gladly look into your face! And yet again, it is symbolic of the distance that keeps us from looking into each other's eyes when we speak. I like this very well.....and you are VERY sweet! And I too pray that it may not be only for here and now, but that the Lord Who made us both and brought us for this moment together, will save us both by Himself that we may see His face for eternity.
Thanks for this, PS!!!!
Your Chechi!
thank u chechi! and thats it.... i too pray to the lord like that.....
Thats a good poem
ya thats a good poem but i missed many letters in the words.. i mean the spelling mistakes... sorry friend......... I'll make it correct now...... ok.... and a big thank u for commeniting on it
U r always welcomed. Keep the fire ablaze....a great poet( u) has come to live
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