On a road of strange curves,
in the conquest of an unfettered fort,
my mind swings and swirls with an endemic zeal
I win, and forfeit the white waters of life.
I try , I fail
I live , I win
though, can we ever decipher
the labyrinth of a mind's eye?
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- Comment from author about the poem: how our mind operates still sort of amazes me...how desicive and yet at the same time so undesicive..its really a struggle to justify and elaborate on what is really going on...
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I like this perspective on it. 'Tis a fascinating subject with all it variencies....ya, unexplainable, and perhaps largely directed by our deparately wicked deceitful hearts and therefore we cannot pin down the wherefore.
u got it...spot on
Mesmerizing... I can't say anything other than that... O.O
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