Love Lemon Twist

Sunlight, Sunrise, Sunray

Rays of light through glass of emotions

Rainbow hue at every sides

Washing away the abnormal mess

Wishing for better yet prevalent days

Emotional barriers remove suddenly

Unlike questionable in quest of messages

Rear view functions of rare parts

Welding popular voices of old flings

Ironing obstacles of unwilling prizes

Warnings of obscurity fantasies

Longing for eternal flames of rare flowers

Ruling out stocks of spotless drums

Settling formal quest for banquet at hand

Sizing movements of sorrows in need

Warming up fashionable garments of love

Water down pots of blossom pales of old

Separating feelings with craze intuition

Counting the fare of love and beauty

Moisturizing flawless desert

Quenching water logs in forest rain

Minding river of passions aboard

Over flowing love taste with lemon twist


  • exquiste1

    This is one of my many first poems. I had great memories, writing this one and major fun timez. :)

  • Cheeky Missy

    It is a fascinating free verse look at "love"...interesting that you classified it as only friendship, for I was inclined to think it romantic...calling it friendship adds a different spin to it. Your similes/metaphors make it a very interesting study. I enjoyed it!

    • exquiste1

      Thanks for the friendly heads up. I have been writing poems for awhile and it is fascinating period. I don't have internet access yet, but when I do, I will post another one...And thanks again for the friendly smiles:)

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