Sunlight, Sunrise, Sunray Rays of light through glass of emotions Rainbow hue at every sides Washing away the abnormal mess Wishing for better yet prevalent days Emotional barriers remove suddenly Unlike questionable in quest of messages Rear view functions of rare parts Welding popular voices of old flings Ironing obstacles of unwilling prizes Warnings of obscurity fantasies Longing for eternal flames of rare flowers Ruling out stocks of spotless drums Settling formal quest for banquet at hand Sizing movements of sorrows in need Warming up fashionable garments of love Water down pots of blossom pales of old Separating feelings with craze intuition Counting the fare of love and beauty Moisturizing flawless desert Quenching water logs in forest rain Minding river of passions aboard Over flowing love taste with lemon twist
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Author:
Exquiste1 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 14th, 2010 12:39
- Comment from author about the poem: Crazy feelings with a twist of love & beauty...
- Category: Friendship
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This is one of my many first poems. I had great memories, writing this one and major fun timez. 🙂
It is a fascinating free verse look at "love"...interesting that you classified it as only friendship, for I was inclined to think it romantic...calling it friendship adds a different spin to it. Your similes/metaphors make it a very interesting study. I enjoyed it!
Thanks for the friendly heads up. I have been writing poems for awhile and it is fascinating period. I don't have internet access yet, but when I do, I will post another one...And thanks again for the friendly smiles:)
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