Slice, slice, end the pain.
End the Misery, cut the vein
the razor blades I never dread,
you feel no pain because you're dead.
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mamacita1214 (
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IF you succeed....that is. I've heard some have tried and woken up to still face this life. And then again, it assumes this is all there is and the Word of God does not agree with such a blissful thought of perpetual escape, that I can see. It is an interesting short little piece, and your comment was useful...hahaha.
are like obsessed with god or sumthing?...your against all my poems and i have you know im only 13 years old
Please forgive me for being offensive...I did not intend or desire to be so. I am not against either of your two poems.
umm okay..im sorry i go against god
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