I just wanna tear this world apart.
Get down on my knees and cry with all my heart.
Life suppose to make one stronger.
Time passes and i struggle every day but i cant do it
any longer.
Oh lord hear my prayer for my daughters sake.
I dont care for myself.
As long as my little angel`s safe,
Im ready for u to my soul take.
Cauze anyway, my life aint nothin But a heartache
D.Dboy.Muratore
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Author:
Dboy (
Offline) - Published: December 21st, 2010 11:53
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Wow. You've written it so well, that it is almost like too sincere to dare commenting on since commenting can be so trite in comparison......thus I hesitate to go further. You communicated the heartache well, and yet for your precious "little angel's sake" it seems it would rather be far preferable that you be rather strengthened than taken....I know I am VERY thankful to still have my daddy.
Life is a gift that we don't always appreciate..
But when we learn to appreciate life, there is no
limit of happiness...
My life is my child, my angel and I'd rather die then
see anything happening to her...
I've learned to live now even if I made alot of
mistakes, but sometimes the things we see as mistakes
are really a blessing...
Enjoy life and smile alot, be happy and love your parents,
Even if we don't always see it for ourselves, they do love their children
more then life it self ...
Best wishes, David
This poem is really short and easily gets its message through to the readers... It also catches the interest of the readers by its acuteness of theme and the way it is rhymed... good one!
Thx...
It is all in our head...
It maybe takes time to write down ones
thoughts but it is a relief when you get it out of your
head..
Keep on writing and reading and I'll do the same...
Thanks again for the comment...
Brs David
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