Yesterday was a great day
but now today it's pouring rain.
All because of stupid lies,
I really thought my heart would fly.
I'm sinking down into silent mode,
all my doors are about to close.
A shut door without a handle.
All i need now is a candle.
To light up my life and set me free
but no one wants to see this side of me.
I'm trying to survive the best i can
but i can't seem to get my feet on land.
In a world without any water.
What's the point? Why even bother?
I tried to believe in you for as long as i could.
i started to think that you understood.
My heart is a swirl of different emotions
and sometimes we wish we had different potions.
An enormoooous cloud is settling in
but a loud scream fills the air. The air goes silent, the clouds still there.
And we wonder why we ever cared.
Life was great once upon a time.
There were birds and trees and rhythm and rhyme.
But my clouds turned grey as did my world
and nothing can change it but a simple Girl.
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Author:
Rainbow_doom14 (
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- Published: December 21st, 2010 15:55
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Excellent! Well-written with your symbolism and pleasant with your end-rhyming and fairly consistent metre....I think you expressed it very well, from your title on through all your metaphors. It is sad indeed and yet I like it because you communicated it so very well.
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