sleep all day
sleep all night
there's nothing eles you can really do.
It's cold outside
There's ice up high
You can't see nothing accept an angel by
your side.
by: Ashley Driscoll
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ashley driscoll (
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- Comment from author about the poem: i wrote this poem when i was 11 so it's about 5 years old. this was my first poem that i wrote and i think i did a pretty good job on this one. im happy that i wrote it, i wrote this because kids allway's picked on me and they still do. so when they pick's on me i reads this poem in my head and i ingores them.That's the best thing i can do, and im happy by doing this.
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Great poem, not all my poems are positive but I kind of do the same thing you do when I get a hard time from people. I'm quite sure that there is an angel by your side so if I could rate this poem I'd give you a 10 because you had a purpose and a message behind your poem. Great job and keep it up.
It is fascinating, because initially you can look at it as saying nothing seriously, but looking longer, can read into it something deeper....the cold corresponds so perfectly with the hateful treatment. Your title was well chosen, the way you put it with a capital "L"....so lonely and therefore so "only".
thanks:)
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