ashley driscoll

Shoting Star

Shoting Star


I'm looking up at the star's right now,
waiting to see if a shoting star will past by, woundering if i can make a wish,
a wish that will last a life time.
The past can be hard, and make you cry.
But thinking of the future can be a surprize.
you can look at your self at a peace of broken glass,
And say stuff about self,
But nothing will never change, a wish of a shoting
By:Ashley Driscoll:)


  • Cheeky Missy

    Very nice! Your comment with it made it mean so much more. Your title doubled rather seems to express your longing for the elusive shooting star.

  • ashley driscoll

    thank you very much

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