A black board with white letter
Teaches us to live better…
Talking gently
Waking smoothly
Breathe deeply and sleep sufficiently…
Letters are arranged formally
But it makes me more to laugh…
The betrayal world of this age
Makes me a condition…
To talk harshly
To walk uneven
And feel to stop breathing…
How I am sleeping….
“Stylish dressing
And fearless acting
Thinking truthfully
Working patiently
Behaving decently…”
I have my own style
But I’m scared of this world
Dishonest society and honest soul…
Impatient mind in this unforeseen world…
Am I decent????
I have practical knowledge…
I planed orderly
Earned honestly
Saved regularly
Intelligently spended
Passionately loved
But not enjoyed completely…
I too want to impersonate him…
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Author:
nikhil PS (Pseudonym) (
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Very fascinating and intriguing, little brother. Interesting meditation. Whom are you impersonating? Yourself? What you thought yourself to be? What you wish to be? I like how you began it with the blackboard, which symbolizes our teachers who would lead us in the right way to go/live...excellent metaphor! I enjoy how you brought in the contrary instructions of the evil world. Yet you mingled it all with the better way,....ie. what is good and right. Again, very fascinating.....I quite enjoyed it! Love, your Chechi
yep... thank dear chechi.. i just didnt impersonate anyone ... just said that as im trying to be like other guy makes me unhappy even after doing things perfectly, i mean earning honestly, passionately loved like that... thats all! really did u enjoyed this poem??
Of course I enjoyed this poem! I quite liked it! And thank you for explaining what you meant! Your Chechi
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