Life obscurities brings about faithful subjects
joining hands with certain people about face
loosing letters for moral support on each value
seating something properly down brings warmth feeling
lasting assumptions for common twilight marriage at ease
later on for some folks bring some kind of affection
catering cakes for casualties on a lot of promotion
wanting the utmost respect in life alone is vicious
obnoxiously overly much folks can be over bearing
shouldn't be much oblige to any new systematic
running offices with corny yet vague people not cool
live unto hopeful measures that is enjoyable today
love one another as you would want to be loved
misconceptions on every corner in reality functions
go with peace as to what you are living for on earth
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Author:
Exquiste1 (Pseudonym) (
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Fascinating, serious meditation, consideration. I enjoyed this poetic look at life, with the nudge in the right direction. The images your metaphors created seem excellent and delightfully thought-provoking. Again, I quite enjoyed this sobering poetic perspective on living!
I thank God for the gift and thank you for the beautiful comment. Without God instill in me the gifts to write them, I would ignore them and move on with my life, but, you said it, "meditations & a nudge"...Thank you once again...:)
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