The snow is falling and so are the
tears. It was this time last year when
it snowed we laughed and played,
together we had so much fun,
Now you are in heaven looking down I hear
you telling me to go play, but how
can I, I miss you so much
Paul.
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Author:
vanessa.ramsey (
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- Published: January 21st, 2011 03:40
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is written for my ex lover Paul who past away in 2010
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
And tasting the loss so intensely you have poignantly presented it, evoking an empathetic response. Excellent! It is a beautiful short and sweet tribute to your beloved, your fond memories, and your sufferings in your irretrievable loss. You make me mourn his loss for your sake....I'm very sorry. Thank you for this tender sweet piece.
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