I miss you Paul

vanessa.ramsey

The snow is falling and so are the

tears. It was this time last year when

it snowed we laughed and played,

together we had so much fun,

Now you are in heaven looking down I hear

you telling me to go play, but how

can I, I miss you so much

Paul.

  • Author: vanessa.ramsey (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 21st, 2011 03:40
  • Comment from author about the poem: This poem is written for my ex lover Paul who past away in 2010
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 34
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments1

  • Cheeky Missy

    And tasting the loss so intensely you have poignantly presented it, evoking an empathetic response. Excellent! It is a beautiful short and sweet tribute to your beloved, your fond memories, and your sufferings in your irretrievable loss. You make me mourn his loss for your sake....I'm very sorry. Thank you for this tender sweet piece.



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