Not Again!!

Lonelykaren

There's a reason
that i've been sad
That ive been crying
and hiding it deep inside

There are things
that wont be said
taht cant go out
cuz theyll hurt ppl instead

i cant tell em
i havent changed
ive hurt them enough
but im still the same

i know God exist
and ive heard him say
your path is unknown
even to me ok

so what can i say
to not hurt them again
so i wont make them cry
tears that are like rain

i told them once
but i wont again
i wont tell them twice
that im depressed

I WONT NOT AGAIN....!!!
  • Author: Lonelykaren (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 21st, 2011 14:29
  • Comment from author about the poem: I wrote this when i started to reallize taht i was the same.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 49
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy, Anna
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  • Cheeky Missy

    You and the majority of us? So very much the same...when we thought we could change and improve ourselves. Salvation belongs unto the Lord. God works in His people to will and to do of His good pleasure....I don't know that any of us really possesses the ability within ourselves to deliver or save ourselves, improving ourselves, but it does seem we can make matters worse. So far as I can see, only the Lord can save and deliver us. As a poem, you excellently portrayed the situation of the depressed person....great job! And with a hint of end-rhyming, which I enjoyed.

  • Anna

    You sound like my brother! Congrats! I like your poem, and I'd favor it if I can figure out how. And about the brother comment, that turns out to be a compliment. So no worries! Although, I don't think many poets use the words that are spelt like this; ppl. ETC.



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