I'm sorry for what I've done to you
I'm sorry for I had been a fool.
You care for me no more than your life,
But I ignored your breaking heart.
You never let me be out of your sight,
But I just pierced your heart with this dart.
I apologize for what I've done to you,
I apologize for I had been a fool.
You were scolded because of me,
I had used you like a tool.
You've always protected me,
I didn't know that your love is true.
Forgive me, for what I've done to you.
Forgive me, for I've been a fool.
But from now on, I'll help you too,
and nothing compares to my promise in you.
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Author:
Hidan (
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- Comment from author about the poem: In fact, this is a poem written by my friend. Under his permission, I presented it to the public.
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Comments1
It is very nicely written, too. If I may dare make a suggestion, it seems the sentiment expressed in this would be better represented by dropping the word "no" in the first line of the second verse/stanza, for the addressee seems to have loved dearly. And if that's the case, then forgiveness almost seems a given, for wouldn't love forgive? I like how it ends sweetly promising to requite the love......I enjoyed this!
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