So cold
Why can’t I be bold
Nothing but heart ache
Can’t I ever catch a break
This darkness consumes me
Help before it takes me
Trying not to let it break me
The light is trying to escape me
To late it’s already gone
It’s about dawn
Every time I open my eyes
I continue to cry
Rivers of tears
Trying to vanquish all my fears
Nothing works
So much for perks
All the warmth has disappeared
Over all these years
My skin is brittle
can’t help but fiddle
The blood is drained from my body
Can you help me anybody
Must retreat
Im totally beat
Must find a way
To stop this decay
But im all out of time
It’s such a crime
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Author:
boricuamami222 (Pseudonym) (
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- Category: Sad
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Comments1
It is VERY sad.....horribly so. You excellently depicted the miserable condition with your metaphors/symbolism. Perfect.....excellent! Dreadfully hopeless....like a forlorn cry from a forsaken dark corner of the dungeon.....as the rats close in.....make me shiver!
thx
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