i'm so weak,
i let my heart wins over my brain.
i'm so stupid,
i use my brain to express what i feel.
how can i make all this things right?
should i have to listen to thier advise?
or
i'll use my mind to figure it out what's best in my life?
if i'll listen to them,
surely, i'll be missing you...
if i'll use my mind,
i'll be tempting you...
& if i'll follow my heart,
the answer lays on you...
i'm so confused
on what must i have to choose.....
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Author:
tamm13 (
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Interesting. You've portrayed the confusion very well. Who is the "you"? A lover? The age-old serious dilemma...you captured it nicely.
thanksss....i'm not sure if he is really my lover.....one thing is 4 sure....and that is i'm his lover...hehehehe......
thanksss....i'm not sure if he is really my lover.....one thing is 4 sure....and that is i'm his lover...hehehehe......
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