confused

tamm13

i'm so weak,

i let my heart wins over my brain.

i'm so stupid,

i use my brain to express what i feel.

 

how can i make all this things right?

should i have to listen to thier advise?

or

i'll use my mind to figure it out what's best in my life?

 

if i'll listen to them,

surely, i'll be missing you...

if i'll use my mind,

i'll be tempting you...

& if i'll follow my heart,

the answer lays on you...

 

i'm so confused

on what must i have to choose.....

  • Author: tamm13 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 25th, 2011 06:53
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 33
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Interesting. You've portrayed the confusion very well. Who is the "you"? A lover? The age-old serious dilemma...you captured it nicely.

    • tamm13

      thanksss....i'm not sure if he is really my lover.....one thing is 4 sure....and that is i'm his lover...hehehehe......

      • tamm13

        thanksss....i'm not sure if he is really my lover.....one thing is 4 sure....and that is i'm his lover...hehehehe......

        • Cheeky Missy

          Ya, and don't we all know what that feels like?! For your sake of course, I wish he might someday soon be your lover as well.



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