such a loyal servent

Jalso

Screwed up, fucked up

Let in the hate.

Eyes feeling weak.

I’m falling apart.

 

Should I assume that someone hears me when I pray?

Summed up, shut up.

Just leave and go break some bones.

Head full of rage don’t you lie, far away.

The puzzle isn’t complete.

 

I’m not the one who is wrong, I’m not right.

God full of hate.

Disrespect.

I won’t lie.

Neither will you.

But buy my soul.

Then I’ll pray.

 

Screwed up, fucked up

Let in the hate.

Eyes feeling weak.

I’m falling apart.

 

I’m falling apart.

So help me I will get you.

I can’t buy the love, then I will take yours away.

  • Author: Jalso (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 26th, 2011 12:35
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 18
  • User favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy.
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Comments1

  • Cheeky Missy

    Hnnn. So, the title being so, is the speaker a loyal servant to sin? It's a nasty poem. Rather fascinating and intriguing, but downright nasty,....and miserable too, it seems. Rather well-written, nonetheless. And for that, I enjoyed it a bit.

    • Jalso

      its about a loyal servant but gets nothing but hate in return

      • Cheeky Missy

        Seems to perfectly befit the servant of sin. Thanks telling me!



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