It’s funny when I’m feeling good

There’s always someone waiting to bring me down.

Is it that they are jealous, envious of the good energy they sense?

That they talk dirty about the way I dress, the way that I feel or appear?

I aint a little kid no more who’ll take everything said to heart, undermine myself or feel like I’m in the wrong.

I don’t need your poor advice, your opinion or negative vibe.

I’m on a clear route; I see the goal in the distant but near future.

I’m in control of my desires & dreams

You cannot, you will not derail me,

I will keep on track, keep a steady pace, there’s only one way, forward.

I don’t really mind, everyone’s entitled to their opinion.

But you aint important or wise so you can’t speak into my life

Like I said, it’s my life so I’ll live it up to the max

I’ll make you see red, I aint responding to your bull, you vexed?

  • Author: CJ Tones (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 27th, 2011 03:53
  • Comment from author about the poem: Created: 01 – 10 -2009 - Just about certain pricks who cant seem to help the fact that they're pricks (jerks for US).
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  • Cheeky Missy

    Oooh...hope that wasn't a dare for bold wee me...funny how it goes that way, though,'re only too right, there's unfortunately frequently somebody ready to take you down a peg when you're starting to ride high finally. Your response is so perfectly stated, I can so easily picture it. If we might only be walking in the truth, the Lord would be our strength and defense, regardless how many darts enemies throw to bring us down, you know?

  • Nexuscjt

    Thanks...I hear you.
    This was written a year ago. But funny how it still applies the more your riding high.

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