On the Borders of blasphemous
And the venomous words
that come out onto the papers!
I direct this towards you
but not towards the feelings inside!
You say it’s not intended
when you don’t know the suspended
Suspensions in the life
of a person of many peoples in the world.
The dark places change a person’s mind
the cries that reach out.
I don’t want to be the enemy of
One that isn’t an enemy.
This is blasphemy, I would agree.
The devil is me, he’s shouting
“set me free!”
I won’t release him
Until my time of need.
respect the fact that i want you to undrstand.
but i know you cant and wont.
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But, the devil isn't wanting to be set free....since when? It's his prey that needs freedom, seems to me.
im going to try to be clear and nice as posable
this was directed towards you.
"On the Borders of blasphemous" at the begining of the song
"I direct this towards you
but not towards the feelings inside!"
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"You say it’s not intended
when you don’t know the suspended
Suspensions in the life"
i am sorry but i must say this too
not all these are about God or religeon.
im not going to laugh, i respect the compairasins that you make with my poems and songs. i thank you for likeing them, but they are all preaty much the same.
the part were it says "This is blasphemy, I would agree.
The devil is me, he’s shouting
“set me free!”
I won’t release him
Until my time of need."
this my mind my other me if you will, is wanting to get out and cause distruction to all thoughs who have aposed and made fun of me.
Well, I suspected as much, when I read the first lines, and cringing dared to comment....perhaps you'd rather I not, or perhaps I'd be wiser to leave off and well enough alone...I'm not wanting to be your antagonist, so perhaps I'd best just end my commenting on your stuff with this fine tribute of yours to our little interactions. Just don't think I am accusing you of blasphemy because of my comment yesterday, I'm not. And thank you VERY much for explaining it to me...I so wish I could be a friend to you, but guess not.
"respect the fact that i want you to undrstand.
but i know you cant and wont."
- my dad
im sorry for responing to the first
Huh? Now I don't understand...if it is not vexatious, would you mind explaining this latest response? I appreciated your initial response, for now I understand you were calling yourself the devil and as usual crying to be set free from the thoughts that unbidden torment you...did I misunderstand? What are you apologizing for?
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