Simply Me

Lonelykaren

I am me
simply me
lonely and forgotten
down by the sea

I hate me
I know you do to
hatefull is my life
consumed with cruelty.

Who knew that being me
simply me
will change your life
and as you read

What i have to say
please just listen, now
"ive cut myself into peaces
ive changed the way i look"

Ive done this for a reason
that you never understood"
my life is dark cold and lonely
now im just being me

i know you dont understand
but this is who i am
a sad emo girl
sad depressed and forgotten

now as you read this
i simply state
"this is who i am now
this is simply meeh."
  • Author: Lonelykaren (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 27th, 2011 14:30
  • Comment from author about the poem: well i wrote this a long time ago. ill slowly be putting the rest on here this was along time ago about 6 months ago.
  • Category: Sad
  • Views: 68
  • Users favorite of this poem: Cheeky Missy
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  • Cheeky Missy

    It is a sad cry, which while almost begging to be loved, does not even reach out its arms for the requested acceptance....but rather defiantly squares it's shoulders, slumping with the discouragement. "By the sea..." seems an excellent metaphor aptly expressing the loneliness. Fascinating. And seems a cry so many tormented can echo. But, please cut some slack for the receiver and don't so readily believe they hate you.

  • Marius

    Beautiful poem! Know though that hate is too honest and strong a feeling to feel for anyone, especially for yourself. Love and accept yourself the way you are, Karen.

    Be loved.

    • Lonelykaren

      thanks and well i try to love myself but its just to hard these days especially with my lack of confidence in meeh. JUst know i am trying.



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