I wish this nightmare was over but it wont ever be
A part of me is gone and i will never get it back
My heart is aching
My world is upside down
I cant stop shaking
So many things i wanted to tell him
But now its too late
Why oh why god did this have to happen
Wish i could have stopped him
I feel so hopeless
God please make my pain disappear
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Author:
boricuamami222 (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 28th, 2011 23:33
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Yikes...sounds like "he" died. Is that what this poem is communicating? Her lover died? The heartbreak is excellently expressed as such...title and all. Great job!
actually it was my nephew who died in October at 17yrs
Oh, I am so sorry to hear that! You paid excellent tribute to his untimely loss in this heartbroken piece. Beautiful. Excellent.
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