Lost it all Poem, by patriots, at My poetic side

I lost it all

With just one touch I lost it all

By saying a couple of words that would make someone’s day

I lost my whole life over that stupid mistake

There’s no way I could take it back

What is done is done and there’s no fixing that

I thought life was the best

Now I think life sucks

I am the one who made this monster out of my self

I am to blame and no one else

Comments +

Cheeky Missy February 1st, 2011 15:12
Wow. Excellent! But how could words that would otherwise make someone's day screw the rest of your life? You described the remorse so perfectly. Beautiful, in spite of the tragedy.

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