A lone house stands far from the road.
Shadows seen through the window,
by flickering candlelight.
She's trying to push trough his vigorous grip.
Fighting along tears and fright.
He strokes her arm, she scratches his skin.
He hits her hard, and again.
She wants to escape, but know she can't.
In fading hope, she makes her last stand...
But her spirit breaks, her strength weakens,
as he throws her down another time.
Suddenly she feels his lips, kissing her's.
And he whispers with threatening voice:
“Tonight, you're mine...”
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Author:
Zojinjo (
Offline) - Published: February 1st, 2011 11:47
- Comment from author about the poem: (No longer part of the tale, since I didn't see the other parts coming soon because of personal stuff.) What happened to this mysterious girl that she felt the need to commit suicide? ** Rated 18+ since referring to rape. No offensive language used. **
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
Oh, la. But you are crafting this eerily! Depicting the horrible scene so chillingly. Excellently portrayed....poor girl! What a vile story such an image wrought...unfortunately I am enjoying (reluctantly?) your tale...can you give it a happy ending somehow?
Well, saying if I am going to give it a happy ending or not would give away some spoilers... if I can call it that.
But if you want to know, send me a private message and I'll tell you.
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